The Keys to Writing a Novel

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Key number 1 – Read! A lot. Read other authors to see how they style things. How do they set up a scene?  How do they create characters?  How do they create an emotional response; any response – love, hate, fear, joy, humor, bad humor, a desire to go to a book burning.

Read different genres. If you’re writing a detective book read sci fi.  If you’re writing romance read about zombies. Actually those two are pretty close to the same. In romance two people try to consume each other emotionally, physically, and intellectually. Zombies want to eat brains. See? The same.

Key number B -Write every day. The easiest way to start a book is to write something. It doesn’t matter what it is. It can be a shopping list, a recollection of a past event, or anything that hits your brain. Just write. If you don’t shop, there are exercises on line to help you think out side the box (ie your skull).  Eventually something will click. You’ll create a character you love. Or you’ll come up with a unique phrase. I mean pretty much every country song starts with a hook phrase.

And do it every day. It isn’t important how long you sit and write. It is important that you do it every day. Writing is a muscle that needs to be exercised. Pen up, pen down, pen up…

Key number III – Bring in the most talented team you can find. I was a terrible writer (maybe still am but for my great team) but I have a very visual brain. I can see scenes and think I can convert them into black and white marks on a piece of paper. It doesn’t always translate. A team that gets to know you helps interprut your mush and helps to convert it into a fine dining.

Oh and trust your team. They can do lots of good stuff like help create something that will be read by a customer, or keep you from being sued for libel, or protect you from embarrassing yourself. That’s been my biggest fear. Writing something so offensive that I become the target of a social media hate campaign.

Of course letting others in means you have to be willing to delete chunks of work or witty (to you only) phrases. It gets harder the farther you go into the process. You’ll start to see your characters as real people. Changing the color of their eyes can be emotionally challenging.

Key number four – Invest yourself. I mean if you can’t feel it, a reader definitely isn’t going to. If you’re writing a scene about a first kiss think about yours. Describe what you saw, felt, smelled, heard. Involve all of the senses.   This means puting on paper for the world to read how you really feel about things. It’s like running naked on a really dark night. People know you’re exposing yourself, but they can’t quite pick out the real you. You’ve disguised you with half truths and things that have nothing to do with the real you.
Key number Z –  Don’t sweat it. Don’t worry about how many copies you’ll sell. If it’s one it’s a blessing. Everybody has different goals when they write. My original goal was to finish a book so I could say I had. With that accomplished I set a new goal, sell a copy. Nailed it.  Next, sell one in a foreign market. Been there done that. Next, make money. Workin on that one. And my next one?  An appearance on the Ellen show. Why not?  Why not me?  Got to always have a dream.


 

M. Louis is the author of the Jake Brand PI series.  Sign up and get a free copy of book 1, Angel’s Devil rated 4.6 stars on Amazon.   Secondhand Smoke (Book 2) is now available. It’s free for Kindle Unlimited subscribers / 2.99 for ebook.

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Can’t Get Enough Free Books

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We just can’t get enough of this giving away books thing!  A few digital copies of Angel’s Devil are still available on the website and now we’ve gone and set up another giveaway on Goodreads too!  From now until February 15th, you can enter to win a paperback copy of Secondhand Smoke. (For US addresses only – if you think we should do a giveaway that includes your country, Tweet to M. or post on his Facebook page.)

If you like:  Robert Crais, Janet Evanovich, Robert B. Parker, Carl Hiassen and/or Robert Galbraith (aka JK Rowling), you’ll enjoy the Jake Brand PI series.

Enter here: https://www.goodreads.com/giveaway/show/169766-secondhand-smoke

Every time you share this post, and Angel gets her wings and a Devil gets peeved.

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Review: Career of Evil

Career_of_Evil_Oct_2015Robert Galbraith’s (JK Rowling) third novel in the Cormoran Strike series, Career Of Evil, delivers the same high quality and suspenseful entertainment as the first two novels. Galbraith continues to develop the characters by sharing more of their past and expands upon the push / pull relationship between Cormoran and his office mate, Robin.

Faced with the shock of an unwanted delivery that sends Cormoran into the spotlight and his business into a tailspin, he is forced to involve himself in solving a crime, despite warnings from the police and the danger particularly to Robin.

Great read from a great artist!

5 stars

Review: The Keeper of Lost Causes

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The Keeper of Lost Causes by Jussi Adler-Olsen
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

The Keeper of Lost Causes, by Jussi Adler-Olsen, is the first of the department Q series. Department Q is tasked with reviewing cold case files to see if there is anything new that can be found. In the initial case, an attractive politician disappears on a ferry.

The main investigator, Carl Morck, is dealing with the trauma of having been shot but surviving while one of his partners was killed and a second was permanently disabled. And, the shooter wasn’t caught. Carl deals with his anger and lack of motivation while learning to work with a new assistant, a Muslim immigrant, who seems kind and caring on the surface, but shows a tougher, resilient and insightful side as they move through the cold path.

The characters are distinct and they are flawed as they work through their own personal demons. They are relatable and real, not in any way cartoonish.

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Support Indie Book Stores

The Jake Brand PI series is now available from 2 more Portland Bookstores! Shop local! Support Independent Book Stores!

MLouis_FortBuildingTeam Jake Brand had a meeting and decided that author M. Louis had far too many copies of his latest book, Secondhand Smoke in the office.  Since we weren’t able to stop him from building forts and generally goofing around with them, we called some local book stores and they were all too happy to put them on the shelves for sale.  We are pleased to report that paperback copies of Secondhand Smoke and Jake Brand book one, Angel’s Devil are now available at Annie Bloom’s Books as well as Broadway Books.

We know he’ll just order another couple of boxes of books and start playing Jenga with them, so PLEASE help us out and go buy copies from these fine local stores so we can re-fresh their stock soon.

These books also make great gifts for the holidays. (hint hint)

Yours truly,
Team Jake Brand

Annie Bloom’s Books
7834 SW Capitol Hwy
Portland, OR 97219
503-246-0053

http://www.annieblooms.com/

Broadway Books
1714 NE Broadway
Portland, OR 97232
503-284-1726

http://www.broadwaybooks.net/

Books Are Gifts That Keep on Giving

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I am happy to announce that 100% of all sales proceeds from my new detective thriller novel, Secondhand Smoke are being donated to Trillium Family Services, the premier provider of mental and behavioral youth services in Oregon.

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All proceeds in November go to Trillium Family Services

Books make great gifts and your purchase of Secondhand Smoke which has been called “endlessly entertaining” by Kirkus reviews will truly be a gift that keeps on giving.

Trillum’s Mission:

We are guided by the simple yet crucial mission of building brighter futures with children and families.

Our vision is to create safe communities where children are healthy and every family has the opportunity for success. Families get the support they need – when and where they need it. There is a focus on prevention and health; organizations and systems are connected in a synergistic sanctuary community that generates: Non –violence, Growth and Change, Democracy, Emotional intelligence, Social learning, Open communication, and Social Responsibility.

Our investment in the future of each child means that the next generation of Oregonians will have the skills to contribute meaningfully through employment, community service, and raising their own healthy families.

“…endlessly entertaining in any situation, especially the perilous kind.” – Kirkus Reviews

Review: Mortal Stakes

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Mortal Stakes by Robert B. Parker
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

We are all faced with dilemmas which force us to choose between two or more opposing paths. In Mortal Stakes by Robert b.Parker, multiple characters make their choices. Which would you choose? Is it more important to be invisible or play by the rules? What trade off makes it okay to harm or even kill another?

Is Marty Rabb, a talented Boston Red Sox pitcher purposely losing games? If so, why? That’s the mystery posed to Spenser by the Red Sox organization. And when Spenser finds the truth what does he do with it? What does his code allow or require him to do with the truth? But just as important, how does he feel about who he really is?

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Review: God Save The Child

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God Save The Child by Robert B. Parker
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

God Save The Child, the second book in the Spenser series by Robert B. Parker, was very satisfying and entertaining. Maybe some of my connection to the book is that Spenser is close in character to my Jake Brand Angel’s Devil. Both are tough, caring, smarty-pants. Spenser attacks the silly veils that we all create to hide our insecurities, or worse, our evil tendencies. Breaking through the false fronts with rhetorical comments and wit, Spenser solves problems, including some of his own. It is especially enjoyable to revisit the ’70’s, the time period within which the story takes place. Parker’s description of clothing, speech characteristics and social norms seems spot on to me.

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Review: The Godwulf Manuscript

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The Godwulf Manuscript by Robert B. Parker
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

A friend of mine was aghast that I had never read a Spenser novel before. “You write detective crime thrillers and you haven’t read Spenser?!” she said. I hid my embarrassment and asked her suggestion for where to start. She said to start at the beginning, so I did. The Godwulf Manuscript is the first of Robert B. Parkers Spenser series. A very entertaining story about a private detective who had been hired by a University to retrieve a rare and fragile manuscript. Like all good cases, this one turns out to be more involved and complex than the theft of the manuscript.

Mr Parker has an easy flowing writing style that’s comfortable to read and follow. His characters are quirky and interesting. An all around enjoyable adventure. It’s quite a compliment when people mention that there’s a bit of Spenser in my PI character Jake Brand. Listening to friends book suggestions is also a wise idea.

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Review: Ratcatcher

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Ratcatcher by Tim Stevens
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

Tim Stevens Ratcatcher is the first in his John Purkiss series. Purkiss is a former member of British secret service who is tasked with tracking down other British secret service members who’ve gone rogue. Ergo the name, a catcher of rats. I found the book entertaining though I thought the plot reached a few too many times, leaving me trying to reconcile how events might unfold as told. It’s a good read on a rainy day. 3.5 stars

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